Tuesday 18 March 2014

1st draft

Today we had to write about on thing about camp. Here is my first draft.
Learning partner's comment:
Feedback: I like how you have lots of detail.
Feed forward: I am not really sure because you did really good.
From Aalaa
Feedback:I like the way you used lots of detail.
Feed forward:I'm not really sure because you did Aye great job.
From Ella

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